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as we lay here dying by ~yaoiboy14:iconyaoiboy14:

Categories Literature > Poetry > General Poetry > Spoken Word


will you press our lips together, then look me in the eyes
fuck me, then show me just how empty you are inside

i feel you move in me, your body is so cold
still just as pretty as ever, beautifull and bold

i hear you, telling me you love me, a beautifull lie
but i know you can't love,  you're soul has died

but i stay, for i'm just your toy to be abused
and when we're done, you leave me empty and used

my love, you seem so dead, and yet so alive
through my pain, your insanity  thrives

i promise always to please you, as best i can
as we lay here  dying, hand in hand
©2009-2010 ~yaoiboy14
:iconyaoiboy14:

Author's Comments

...comment or be eaten by rabid ducks

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~Emo-Tional643 Jun 5, 2009, 10:11:26 AM
Ryann!! you havent been on in foreverrr!!
Puh, im glad you finnally posted soemthing, iv'e already read your gallery/faves while you were away :]

Anyway, i really like this new poem :]
s';pecially the rhyme scheme

...I WANT A PET RABID DUCK!!

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Oh my 'effin god
It's the Jellemeno Beavers
I heard that 'effin song
On my radio receiver

Boing Boing Boing
when the jellemeno beavers are in the house
Boing Boing Boing
der'aint no wrong way to do the jellemeno bounce
:iconyaoiboy14:
~yaoiboy14 Jun 5, 2009, 10:26:23 AM
lol, :hug: thanx :) i'm glad you like it, but ducky likes to nom on peoples brains DX

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my bf ~yaoifanboy6 read his poetry i wuvs him :cuddle:
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YAOISM SHOULD BE A RELIGION. IF YOU BELIVE THIS, COPY AND
PASTE THIS IN YOUR SIG.
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:headbang: Disturbed=what good music is all about!
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Hollywood undead is my god :worship:
:iconshadowmere13:
~shadowmere13 Jun 5, 2009, 11:06:41 AM
so awesome! :iconiloveyouplz:

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Don't click the blue button!!!!

:bulletblue:


Nie jestem zła, jestem po prostu niezrozumiana
:iconroachie72:
~Roachie72 Jun 5, 2009, 11:25:43 AM
Pet rabid duck... i'll try to send u one for ur bday :) and u didnt answer ur fone.... and robbeh called u once too :o

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Roach was here...
:iconroachie72:
~Roachie72 Jun 5, 2009, 11:25:53 AM
Niceness :)

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Roach was here...
:iconenvy-is-my-god:
~Envy-is-my-god Jun 5, 2009, 11:32:35 AM
:hug: :heart: ur poem

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the seven deadly sins, gotta commit em all ;p
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If you love something, set it free..
..Or cripple it so it can't get away! :devilish:
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I'm Envys' number one fan :#1:
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Envy is my GOD!!! :worship:
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~KawaiiKitty1121 Jun 5, 2009, 11:42:48 AM
wow..... thats amazing! eaten by rabid ducks? no comment.....

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Who lied to you and to you and told you life was fair?
:iconemo-tional643:
~Emo-Tional643 Jun 5, 2009, 12:44:55 PM
:]]] I like noming on peoples brains.. :]] the stupider=more soupy =better :]] (aka the brains of the blonds that talk about me behind my back.. ducky would like the gourmet flavors:]])
What i thought was awesome is that Justin put
"Comment or i eat your brain"

--
Oh my 'effin god
It's the Jellemeno Beavers
I heard that 'effin song
On my radio receiver

Boing Boing Boing
when the jellemeno beavers are in the house
Boing Boing Boing
der'aint no wrong way to do the jellemeno bounce
:iconemo-tional643:
~Emo-Tional643 Jun 5, 2009, 12:45:00 PM
OMG HE DID?! sorry, i was out getting Maddie's bday present... and i think the point of commenting was to overflow Ryann's inbox with praise... >_<

--
Oh my 'effin god
It's the Jellemeno Beavers
I heard that 'effin song
On my radio receiver

Boing Boing Boing
when the jellemeno beavers are in the house
Boing Boing Boing
der'aint no wrong way to do the jellemeno bounce
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